No Place to Hide

My response to Jane Dougherty’s Poetry challenge #45: Summer storm, also linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night #178 – Saving Grace

Summer Storm

photo ©Fir0002  

 

No place to hide

On a path overhung with trees:

No place to hide,

Escape the thrumming of sulphide,

Imminent lightning on the breeze,

An undercurrent of unease:

No place to hide

 

© Kim M. Russell, 2016

Jane set us the challenge of writing a rondelet, which has seven lines with a strict number of beats per line and a rhyming pattern, with the theme of summer storm and an accompanying inspirational image. I’ve taken lines from a poem I wrote for Sue Vincent’s Thursday Photo Prompt – Cave – #writephoto  today and reworked them into a rondolet:   https://writinginnorthnorfolk.com/2016/08/25/natures-way/

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28 thoughts on “No Place to Hide

    1. Thank you, Jane. I do love a storm. When I was about twelve, I stayed up all night watching a storm from my bedroom window on the top floor of a block of maisonettes in south London. It’s the only way to find out how powerful lightning is – it split a tree in half!

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    1. This was my first rondolet and I really got on with it. I’d already written about a storm for Sue Vincent’s challenge, so I took some of the lines from that poem and jiggled them about a bit, cut away some words and lines, added the repeated line and it kind of fell into place. If only poetry was like that every day!

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  1. Seems like our weather here tonight. I specially love: Escape the thrumming of sulphide-

    Thanks for your hosting over the last two days. Really appreciated your help.

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