On the air,
the taste of frost;
breath of wood smoke
and tang of leaves
are suspended in twilight.
A full moon reaches out
to touch reflections
splintering the white,
tinged with bright lights
of Christmas trees.
Twinkling through
the streetlight’s glow,
intimate lamps of home
remind us that its time
to make our way.
In the darkening grey,
contours of icy holly
prickle like sharp hogs
in the hedgerow,
where berries glisten.
As we walk, we listen
to the fluty hoot
of a hunting owl
and the screeching echo
of its mate’s reply.
Kim M. Russell, 2016

Photo taken by David Russell
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads The Final Twilight ~ Micro Poetry
Today Kerry is our host and we’re putting the “mini’ back into the Sunday Mini-Challenge, and returning to the option of form poetry. The object of this challenge has been to write a poem in no more than 10 lines but since it is December, and Christmas is approaching, Kerry is feeling generous and has extended the number of lines to 25. We can choose our own form or write in free verse, if preferred. This weekend, our frame of reference is ‘the final twilight”, quoted from ‘A Wolf’ by Jorge Luis Borges – here is a link to the poem at Poetry Foundation.
My poem was inspired by a visit to Holkham Hall on Thursday for a candlelit tour. As we walked along the tree-lined path to the main entrance, we were dazzled by the lights on the many Christmas trees, and by the frost and owls.
Such excellent images, so evocative of Christmas and winter. I think the sound qualities.
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Thank you,Kerry!
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This is the feeling I would love to have on a Christmas night… a walk on wintry streets, the lights, the lights that make December bright.
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It was a magical evening!
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This is such a lovely peaceful write! Just wonderful!
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Thank you, Mama Zen!
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You describe this so beautifully, you took me there, on that walk. I especially love the owls.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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Brava. 🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you, Dorna!
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A wonder-full December scene full of holiday mood…the owl’s fluty song makes me smile, Kim!
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Thank you, Lynn! I’m happy to have made you smile 🙂
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You’ve poetized an evening in the holiday season. I can smell the welcomed cold breathed by the snow, the colors of the season showing off through windows, the birds singing of year’s ends. Love this.
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Thank you, Magaly! I’m delighted you like it 🙂
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Fluty hoot! That is exactly the sound, and such a charming way of expressing it.
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Thank you, Marian!
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the last of frost and wood smoke… enjoyed this sensory poem..
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I’m delighted you enjoyed it, Margaret!
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It reminds me of the Christmas nights i experienced as a child. I would listen to the night sounds. Christmas was always a tense time in our home, but the Carols sung by wildlife as I lay alone in my bed were comforting.
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I’m glad my poem brought back comforting memories for you, Susie. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Very evocative and atmospheric.
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Thank you!
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