In the shadow of the gallows,
not far from the hangman’s
noose, the young pick-pocket
drowns in the shallow
murk of a blindman’s
holiday, once the jailer’s
doused the glim.
He was born
under a threepenny planet, dipping
wipers for a tot of lightning,
dodging charlies and soul-drivers.
Holed up in a gospel-shop, pot-valiant,
he forgot that the devil
is a cruel caper-merchant.
Kim M. Russell, 2017

Image found on http://www.oldbaileyonline.org/static/JourneyTyburn.jsp
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Today Marian has welcomed us to the Imaginary Garden, where we share poems long, short, old and new. Over the weekend, I read a review of a novel set in Georgian London’s criminal underworld, which inspired me to write a poem that makes use of Georgian criminal slang.
The Tyburn Jig – dancing on the end of a rope on Tyburn gallows
Tyburn – a site of execution, known as ‘Tyburn Tree’ at Marble Arch in London
Blindman’s holiday – darkness
Douse the glim – put out the light
Born under a threepenny planet – unlucky
Dipping wipers – stealing handkerchiefs
Lightning – gin
Charlies – eighteenth century law enforcers
Soul-drivers – priests
Gospel-shop – a church
Pot-valiant – drunk
Caper-merchant – dancing master
Am glad you included the meaning of all those words… was lost in the blindman’s holiday without that glim!
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🙂 It’s similar to Cockney rhyming slang, which is about 100 years older, and probably evolved from it.
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Nicely done, Kim! I knew of Tyburn, and from that I knew what Tyburn jig meant.
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Thanks Merril. I’ve been watching Taboo, which has reawakened my interest in history and crime, so when I read a fascinating book review over the weekend, I couldn’t help myself!
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We’re watching “Taboo,” too! I love it. 🙂
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🙂
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This is brilliantly executed, Kim!❤️
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Thank you Sanaa! xxx
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Will the real criminal please stand up. It’s amazing what you created with that motley crew of words.
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Thanks Colleen!
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Wow! Every word carries its weight in this poem.. I so enjoyed the read, Kim.
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Thank you, Kerry! I’m delighted you like it!
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This is great! Love how you used the book for your inspiration.
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Thank you, Teresa!
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Loved the inclusion of slang… a grim ending for an unlucky thief
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It is an entirely new set of ‘words’ that one must be aware of to understand the poem.
Hank
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Slang is so interesting. I compared with some modern slang words and there are quite a few similarities.
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Not too much has changed over the centuries!
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True!
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An awful age that you have captured in verse very effectively.
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Thank you!
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Dark and fun at the same time, quite a feat. I just finished re-reading The Handmaid’s Tale… very different time, but this brought up those scenes for me, as well. (Yikes.)
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Oh, what a book The Handmaid’s Tale is!
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I can see your little pickpocket. They sure liked their public hangings back then.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Yvonne!
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Brava.. 🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you, Dorna!
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