When mother forgot to shut the curtains at night,
outside the window the sulphurous street light
invaded my bedroom and filled it with shadows
of slippery hobgoblins with fingers so thin
they could fit in my ears and burrow under my skin,
squirm into the feathers that softened my pillows,
and wait until I’d fallen asleep in my bed
to come out from hiding and enter my head,
and permeate it with monsters and ghouls,
the things that gobble up young children’s souls.
But I had a secret, a place I could hide,
where evil hobgoblins could not get inside:
I recited the poems that I’d learnt by heart,
good magic to counter the goblins’ black art.
Kim M. Russell, 2017

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My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Boogeyman
Rommy says that children can have very vivid imaginations- she did when she was young. They can conjure up fanciful notions to delight themselves or scare themselves silly. Most kids have at least one thing they fear. Some kids fear bugs. Some fear the dark. And some don’t have a real name for what it is they fear waits for them in the dark. But they know it’s out there. Sometimes it goes by a name – the boogeyman.
For today’s prompt, Rommy would like us to contemplate the idea of the childhood boogeyman.
Ah! I love this!
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Thank you!
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The suggestive fear at the start of this poem is chilling..
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When I moved from my grandparents’ house in a quiet back street to my parents’ flat near a main road, I was very bothered by a flashing neon sign as well as street lights!
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Shadows are just as scary as sounds of the night. Good thing you had your incantations!
Anna :o]
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Thank you, Anna! Have a great weekend!
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I am tickled by the idea of poetry keeping the goblins away! The rhyming and rhythm suited the subject very well.
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Thank you, Rommy! Have a wonderful weekend!
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This is incredibly evocative, Kim!❤️ I can picture those shadows on your bedroom wall and delighted in “I recited the poems that I’d learnt by heart,good magic to counter the goblins’ black art.” Beautifully executed.❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa! Only two days of NaPoWriMo left. Have a great weekend!
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Oh yes!❤️ You too, have a lovely weekend 😀
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Poetic Magic. Brill.
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Thanks Paul!
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So that’s why we learned to write poems. The pen is heavier than the erupting sward.
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True!
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Yes, words can do magic, especially memorized poetic words.
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🙂
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Goodness. Rhyme works SO well here. Like an incantation. Wonderful.
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Thank you, De!
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Ooh – spooky indeed. But how wonderful that you found such excellent magic!
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Thank you, Rosemary! Poetry saves lives.
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Thank goodness for those poems!!
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Life savers!
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Yeah!!! well done
“I recited the poems that I’d learnt by heart,
good magic to counter the goblins’ black art.”
much love…
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Thanks Gillena!
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Those thin fingers are really the most scary… like a parasite.
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Yes they are!
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Excellent!
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I like this very much, Kim!
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Thank you, Merril!
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