Outside is a garden,
wild and green,
from my study window seen.
It’s tangled with branches
and shadowed with leaves:
my garden has the coolest breeze.
The riotous grass
is sunlight-dappled,
scattered with plum, quince and apple.
The dome of willows
is a hideaway
where cats, deer and pheasants play.
Outside the window are trees and birds;
inside there’s a writer with a head full of words.
Kim M. Russell, 2017

My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Looking Out / Looking In
Lillian is hosting today’s Poetics. She tells us that she grew up in a house with a large picture window. As a young girl, she loved going window shopping with her best friends. She found Alfred Hitchcock’s thriller movie Rear Window very disturbing! She has also told us a little about Johari’s Window Theory, a technique used to understand relationships with others and with one’s self.
Which leads to our prompt: Lillian would like us to walk around our houses or apartments with a camera and take a photo of the view from a window: of the window itself; looking at the window from the outside; or looking into the window; and then write a poem that is somehow related to that window/view. We should also try to include the word ‘window’ in the title or body of the poem. It may take us someplace metaphorically, actually describe what we see or cause us to ruminate. We should let the imagination dwell ‘in the window’ and then take off from there!
The post should include two things: a photo of a window or window view (inside or outside) and a poem that includes the word ‘window’ in the title or the text.
Wonderful photo and wonderful post. Smiling I am. Tried to pick out a favorite stanza….but I love it all. A perfect writer’s window scene!!!
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Thank you so much, Lillian! I wish I could teleport you over so you could see the garden in person. We’ve been trying to tidy it up a little bit – but not too much! 😉
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Riotous grass – love that line!
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It is! It’s rarely mown so that the deer have something to chew on. We had to have four trees cut down or pollarded recently to let some more light in. Now I can see the boats on the cut beyond our back gate.
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I like how the window separates the trees and birds on one side from the words on the inside. Nice view of the garden.
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Thank you, Frank!
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Before I even looked at the photo I thought, “Oh, I could write there!” You related it well, and in a nice form. The photo rocks, too!
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Thank you, Charley!
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Love this look at your garden!
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😁
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A bucolic idyll 🙂
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The last two lines, yes!
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I also love your riotous grass…ours was mowed at weekend..it had got riotous. I also like the plums and apples, it will be a haven of loveliness in the autumn.
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Your yard & your poem embraces idyllic, halcyon, mother earth moments in a natural riot of green on green; a place of peace & inspiration; suburbs, what a reality.
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Thanks Glenn!
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I love this, Kim, and so relate to it. It would be fun digging into the archives to find how many poems have been inspired by my office tree house (2nd story). Lovely photo, too. Makes me want to roll in the grass.
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Thank you, Victoria!
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What a serene and lovely scene you have painted for us Kim ~ The setting is soothing as the writer whips up a storm of words, smiles.
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Literally a storm this morning – thunder has been growling and roaring since very early this morning and now it is raining heavily.
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This is beautiful! xx
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Thank you kindly!
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What a glorious spot, and a wonderful poem! Loved it.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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I totally agree with Victoria – this picture and poem makes me want to roll in the grass! I love how you framed the picture with the window pane making 4 different sections. Yeppers. I could write here. Now onder you do such amazing writing!
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Thank you, Toni!
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Lovely photo, words and rhythm.
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Thank you, Sumana!
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Oh, I like this. It’s so simple, and so lyrical. It has a classic kind of feel to it. And I love your garden. So very green.
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Thank you, Sarah! That’s the neatest bit. We’re busy clearing brambles and nettles from the rest of it! Let the sun shine in!
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Oh, yes. We need lots of light around here, too. We moved in to a house with a very neat garden – all narrow straight beds and evergreen shrubs. We’ve spent the last few years making it look wilder and less restricted. Maybe we’ll meet in the middle somewhere!
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A beautiful view Kim and I enjoyed your poetic tour.
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Thanks Janice!
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I love the rhythm and rhyme in your poem Kim and the tranquility in the image – a perfect writing sanctuary :o) xxx
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Thanks Xenia! xxx
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How pretty your view is..a conduit to your writing process, I’m sure!
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Thanks Kathy!
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Sounds like a wonderful and relaxing place. I like the imagery and can imagine myself being there.
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Thank you!
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A fresh and wonderful feeling….so close to nature…so lovely!!
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Thank you, Sreeja!
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Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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