Under an overflowing
ashtray sky, the train stops.
Frost seethes on scrubby sidings,
where naked trees stretch
pale, angular limbs. The engine
rumbles and we’re gliding
towards the tunnel of night,
on tracks lit up with winter aconite.
Kim M, Russell, 2018
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Finding \Emotions and Concepts in Things, also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Sarah Russell is our guest bartender here at the dVerse pub today. She says that, in keeping with William Carlos Williams’ line from ‘A Sort of a Song’, where he reminds the poet about using metaphor and says “No ideas but in things,” our challenge is to take a concept or feeling — hope, joy, despair, longing, patriotism, anger, grief, etc. — and write a poem that captures the concept without telling the reader what the concept is. It is up to the readers of the poem to name the concept or feeling in their comments.
Sarah has shared some inspirational quotations from Saint Augustine, Chekov and Wallace Steven and examples from a variety of poets.