How can we grasp reality
without images and parables?
We live by laws of nature
and sing our hymns of praise;
reach for heaven
and find infinity and flux,
children fishing for stars in oceans.
Like stars we return to dust,
guide others to join up the dots,
to understand the paradox
between belief and reality,
anchors in temporality.
Kim M. Russell, 1st April 2018

My response to the Poetry School NaPoWrimo Prompt for Day 1: Tell Me Something I Don’t Know’, shared on Poets United Poetry Pantry
Today, Ali asked for poems that teach the reader something. Whether it’s an obscure piece of trivia, a word in a new language, or an idea that will change the world, the only stipulation is that the reader should know more at the end than they did at the beginning.
Our example poem is Michael Donaghy’s poem ‘Quorum’.
Great anchor of teaching the paradox! And this verse-image touched me deeply: “children fishing for stars in oceans”.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Daniela!
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Quite profound!
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We need a bit of both… love how you hint at the stars and what we can imagine from the constellations.
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Thanks Bjorn.
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An enigmatic poem grappling with philosophical concepts such belief versus reality.
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I love the children fishing for stars in oceans…….lovely.
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Beautifully profound!😍😍
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Thank you, Sanaa! 💟💟
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A mixture of both I am thinking although a good balance is tricky at times
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Definitely tricky, Robert.
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How can we live real lives without the fantastical bits, indeed…
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Indeed, the right balance is needed, in order to understand the truth 🙂
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My that is some prompt and you certainly gave me lots to think about! Nicely done.
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Thank you, Donna!
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Yes, profound and thought provoking. The business of balance: Believing that because we stand upright, we have it…not so,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com
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Thank you, Elizabeth.
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I love the fishing for stars in the ocean…a lovely poem but at the same time, quite profound.
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Thank you, Toni. 🙂
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Brava.. 😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Thanks Dorna!
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Humans need to share stories almost as much as they need to create them .
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I agree!
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THis is the best reason for images and comparisons. Poets make the invisible visible.
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Thank you, Susan.
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The opening question is fantastic!
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Thank you, Rajani!
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Love this. Beautiful, clever, smart…paradoxical.
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Thank you, Myrna.
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you!
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Yes, we need to shown (and told) how to live our own lives and hopefully distinguish that which to follow and which shun. As children we absorb so many things and then as we grow up have to determine which course to follow. But the choice is ours and no one elses.
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And then we write about it, Robin!
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A transcendent piece, eloquently rendered.
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Thank you, Wendy.
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