Ten
Don’t get too close.
Nine
You are no super-human astronaut in the thrall
of a brutal,
brilliant cosmic flash.
Eight
Keep away from powerful explosions
brighter than the Milky Way.
Seven
You know, it may not be a supernova.
Six
It may well be the freaky death throes of a star,
torn apart by the tidal
forces of a rapidly spinning black hole
Five
or the black heart of some distant galaxy,
a spaghettified star colliding with itself
in an intense burst of light.
Four
However bright and starry the night
Three
and however blue the galaxy,
Two
try not to fall for a supernova
or into the eddy of a black hole –
One
and don’t forget to make a wish.
Kim M. Russell, 11th April 2018

My response to The Poetry School NaPoWriMo prompt for Day 11: Counting
Ali has given us the three example poems today and advises us to take note of how the poets use the device of numbered sections, of counting, to tell their stories. He would like us to use either numbered sections or counting as a device in some other way to tell your stories. The example poems are: ‘The True Story of Eleanor Marx in Ten Parts’ by Tara Bergin, ‘New World Hymn’ by Momtaza Mehri, and Abigail Parry’s ‘The Knife Game’.
I chose to rewrite a poem I posted in March 2017, ‘Brutal as a Supernova’.
Excellent piece. I thoroughly enjoyed the progression.
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Thank you, Shawna.
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Oh ho, wow. This is me, spinning off into space. From the title, to the structure, to the content itself, I LOVE this.
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Thank you!
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Brava.. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna! 🙂
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