ticking a tune like flicking teeth
on a comb in the shadows
of the mangroves:
Technicolor crabs wielding
lethal-looking purple claws
at the ends of blood
orange legs; peering
with jack-o’-lantern eyes.
They are benign eco warriors,
leaf and seed collectors,
feeders of the forest, unseen
Costa Rican jewels of Halloween.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads NaPoWriMo April 12 – Costa Rica Photos
Margaret tells us that Costa Rica is the home of her daughter’s friend, Eva, who started out as a pen pal through a High School English class assignment about seven years ago. Her daughter visited Eva’s family last year and when asked, she was thrilled to supply photographs of her country for this prompt, with permission for us to use them. Margaret says that the poems can be about Costa Rica but do not have to be, they are just a jumping off point.
I chose the image of a Halloween crab. I read that they live underground until April, when they re-emerge from their hide-outs at the first rainfall and thousands appear on beaches to spawn. I’d love to witness that in real life!
You capture the scene magically
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Thank you, Jae.
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Wonderful description of these striking critters. You first lines sound like the way crabs move. And calling them eco warriors is so very fitting.
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Thank you! I’d love to see them appear on a beach – they’re stunning!
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They are!
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Yes, they do “tick a tune”. Just watched a documentary on various creature, this was one of them. Seeing them scurry about in a huge group is amazing – the are being attacked and killed by some sort of kiiler (red?) ant that has invaded the area.
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You have captured the scene so gorgeously, Kim!💞 I love “peering with jack-o’-lantern eyes.”😍
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Wow! those Halloween crabs are something else! Your words captured them perfectly. How colorful. I especially like how you started this poem….the sound of flicking teeth on a comb. These ‘musical notes’ make a difference in any poem.
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Thank you, Jane. I’d love to see those crabs up close. They are almost fluorescent!
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It’s a wonderful-looking crab! And you have done it justice with your vivid description.
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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These many colored crabs are so beautiful!!! Loved your poem!
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Thank you, Annell!
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I like your words “Technicolor crabs” and indeed they are. Enjoyed your poem so much!
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Thank you Ellecee!
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I love the eco warriors, feeding the forest. Cool.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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I loved the Costs Rican jewels of Halloween!
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I love, ‘technicolor crabs’.
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