circle of life
seasons come and go … always
the Cosmos leads us
in a mesmerising dance
among the stars and planets
a new horizon
the temptation to explore
distant mysteries
an ever-growing courage
to wave goodbye to the earth
just another star
a distant blue memory
nature’s origins
offering up the treasures
from her abundant garden
the earth keeps spinning
her dance shoes unravelling
season to season
captured in a pirouette
the constant circle of life
Kim M. Russell, 27th October 2018

My response to Carpe Diem #1530 Universe … Soliloquy No Renga (solo-renga)
We have reached the letter U for universe and our challenge is to create a Soliloquy No Renga (solo-renga) inspired by the following haiku:
circle of life
seasons come and go … always
the Cosmos leads us
© Chèvrefeuille
We must start with the given haiku and our solo-renga may have a maximum of 12 stanzas and a minimum of six.
Great piece!
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I like how you brought a feel of human nature to Earth.
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Thanks Ken.
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A new style
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Ah, simply Fabulous! (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna! 😊
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Beautifully penned. Love the feeling of movement!
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You did a nice job on this solo-renga. Awesome story that makes me feel great … our universe embrasses us.
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Thanks Kristjaan.
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what you wrote above is something very rarely people notice… the beauty of universe beyond science … hope I will get to learn more and more from you 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments. 😊
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you deserved it ma’am:)
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