the sound of the surf
enters my home through the open window
and a butterfly
Chèvrefeuille (2018)
an ephemeral shimmer
on its ocean-scented wings
the curtain flutters
ruffled by a summer breeze
and the crash of waves
silver-washed butterfly
sails into the blue again
Kim M. Russell, 14th February 2019
My response to Carpe Diem #1607 Tan Renga Challenge Month 2019 (11) an open window
Today we have a Hineri episode – a Tan Renga with a twist – which means that we not only have to write the second stanza, but also a third and fourth stanza.
writing in north norfolk 
Fluttering curtains and crashing waves, an image of being on summer holidays. Nice !
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Thank you!
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Your last two lines make a great closer.
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Thanks Ken.
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Brava… (@—>—) (@—>—)
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Thanks Dorna! 🙂
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