moon past full
the beginning of a little more
darkness
hours until birds start singing
echoing tick of the clock
moon and flowers
the stupidity pricked by a needle
entering the colder season
even the pine trees shiver
in the icing of moonlight
first frost
when mums start to feel chilly
I get a cotton waist warmer
while anticipating snow
toes toast by the open fire
slowly spring
is making an appearance
moon and plum
fitting out naked branches
with kimonos of blossom
a traveler’s heart
it also should look like
chinquapin flowers
yellow petals on the breeze
impatient to fly away
crane and feathers
in a black robe
clouds of flowers
early moon has been eclipsed
and the birds have stopped singing
Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold) Kim M. Russell, 24th February 2019

My response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #73 Renga With Basho
This weekend we have a Renga With Basho episode, in which we create a renga from six haiku written by Basho, all of which have been taken from Jane Reichhold’s Basho, The Complete Haiku.
We can choose the line-up, adding our two-lined stanzas and creating a ‘closed chain’ by referring back to the hokku (opening stanza) in the ageku (closing stanza).
Brava… (@—>—) (@—>—)
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Wow, this is stellar…or should I say “lunar”, Kim!
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Thank you kindly, Lynn! 🙂
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What a joy this is … a wonderfully crafted renga with the master himself. Excellent job Kim.
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Thank you so much, Kristjaan.
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