Swan skims the water
dips its beak into molten orange sun-spill, breaks the meniscus that keeps the dark depths in before lifting its wings upwards into pink and violet layers of sky
a single white feather rocks on ripples
Kim M. Russell 12th July 2019

My response to Carpe Diem #1701 sundown (or sunset) one-bun
In today’s episode of this ‘Summer Love’ month, the prompt is sundown (or sunset) and the challenge is to create a ‘one-bun’, a form invented by Jim Kacian. The one-bun is an ultra-short haibun which has just one line of prose (including the title) and a (one-line) haiku.
A great image-provoking poem! 🙂
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Thank you!😊
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OH! Fabulous! (@—>—) (@—>—) (@—>—)
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Thank you, Dorna!😊
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This is really beautiful Kim- but FYI, I am not seeing the image.
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Thank you, Linda! The image came up OK when I posted it a d it’s showing now on my Kindle. I was looking back at some old posts recently and some of the images seemed to have disappeared.
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Yummy!
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Thanks Rosemary!
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