Inner Robot

I haven’t submitted to Visual Verse in a long while, but I was inspired by July’s image by Franck V.- and my poem has been included! You can either click here to read all of the poems and find mine on page 25, or you can go directly to ‘Inner Robot‘.

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30 thoughts on “Inner Robot

  1. I feel like this sometime as well. I seem to be on one track nowadays. I feel like I am operating on my inner robot nowadays. Auto pilot is easier than thinking oftentimes. One step. Another step. Keep moving robotically through the days. I really DO like this poem a lot!

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  2. This is gorgeously rendered, Kim! ❤️ Especially love; “I fill a tumbler with water from the tap, struggle first to turn the knob, and now I’m mesmerised by sparkling bubbles in the gush.” 🙂 Congratulations on having your poem published on the Visual Verse! ❤️

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  3. Oh, the images your words brew into being, Kim! I especially love the effect of reading the poem while looking at the facial expression of the cyborg. Something in the eyes, in the curb of the mouth, in the tilted head… says, “dead fish and sailors” and so many feels.

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  4. This is really stunning and special … authentic … powerful rendered … the adjectives just keep on coming to me. Need I add: wonderful writing!

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