tepid rain shower
mingling with warm pool ripples
sun sparkles on skin
tepid rain shower
releases petrichor scent
dusty afternoon
mingling with warm pool ripples
not a breath of breeze
early leaf fall floats
sun sparkles on skin
emerging from deep water
sudden splash of light
Kim M. Russell, 18th July 2019

My response to Carpe Diem #1705 enjoyment … a modern summer kigo
Today we have some Vivaldi with our challenge, which was a lovely background as I wrote my fusion haiku and troiku. The theme is ‘enjoyment’ and the haiku we are using to create a new fusion haiku are by Jane Reichhold – making this a Crossroads episode:
outdoor shower
bathed in sun colors
of hot water
slipping into the pool
naked divides the night
sun-warmed waters
Jane Reichhold (from her modern saijiki, A Dictionary of Haiku”)
beautiful
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Thank you.
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Awe…such Sweetness. (@—>—)
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I like the feeling, that mid summer heaviness of heat – and heated water, and the slow tumble of the few leaves that lose their muster and succumb …
you’ve captured that essence really well Kim 🙂 in your fusion and troiku
(and just to be clear – the series is great, but I don’t actually like dipping into tepid pool/stream/lake water – LOL)
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Thank you, Pat. I haven’t dipped in any water in years, but I might go paddling with my grandson this weekend 😉
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oh that sounds delightful 🙂
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Beautiful! I would love some rain on this extremely dry and very hot day.
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Thank you, Cie – I’d send some over to you but we have sunshine this morning.
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