around the mansion
daisies standing strong together
after the storm
Chèvrefeuille, 2012
around the mansion
a common constellation
twinkling in the grass
daisies standing strong together
pregnant with pollen
refreshed by raindrops
after the storm
welcome hum of honeybees
ichorous sunshine
Kim M. Russell, 7th August 2019
My response to Carpe Diem #1719 Daisies: Troiku challenge
Daisies are today’s flower prompt and the challenge is to create a troiku from a given haiku.
writing in north norfolk 
after the storm
welcome hum of honeybees
ichorous sunshine
– now that’s an very intriguing word choice: ichorous …. hmmm …. I’m a bit on the fence with it … but actually am more smitten than not …. it holds a certain independent vibration from the honeybees’ hum … but I think it is rather a brilliant choice Kim …. how fascinating. 🙂
lovely troiku – you’ve created a story from 3 rather separate lines – their identities, when pulled apart from the whole, are quite “odd” for haiku – but you’ve done it very well 🙂
Cheers!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I was going to write liquid sunshine, but I wanted a word like mellifluous; ichorous seemed to fit and it sounds like Icarus!😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think you made the absolute word choice – it works on so many levels 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Brava… (@—>—)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Cheers Dorna! 😊
LikeLike