The sea awakens
as a kraken
from steady
in-and-out of sleep,
rises from the deep,
utters
a staccato stutter
of briny breath
(with undertones of birth and death).
Its growl grows, rocks and rolls
waves into oceanic roar,
a seismic tempest never heard before.
Kim M. Russell, 13th January 2020

My response to dVerse Poets Pub Quadrille: Roaring in the New
De is our host this Monday, and she wants to get us roaring with the first quadrille of 2020.
Well now, that’s just spectacular. Especially this line:
“a staccato stutter
of briny breath
(with undertones of birth and death).”
I can see him rising. Wonderful.
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Thank you, De!
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Love the way you describe the tempest rising the sea… all that sound… great.
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Thanks Bjorn.
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The sea off the coast of Oregon showed its Kraken-like nature this past week. We’re experiencing a king tide and 30 foot waves. A family was swept out to sea because they stood too close to watch the storm. The sea is not to be trifled with.
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Most definitely not, Linda.
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“from steady
in-and-out of sleep,
rises from the deep,
utters
a staccato stutter
of briny breath”
The tempest sea….I can feel its rhythm here….feel its rocks and roars and growls. There’s a rolling rhythm here….the tempest sea. A roiling. I enjoyed this one very much, Kim.
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Thank you so much, Lill. I’m huddled up in the warmth of our living room at the moment, typing this on my Kindle because my study is freezing, and listening to the storm outside. I hope I didn’t talk it up in my poem!
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Such a tempest can brew on the Great Lakes too, or here our inland sea, Puget Sound.
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Glenn I can attest to Great Lake tempests, but no Krakens here (that I know of!)
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Amazing!
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love this
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Thank you, Maureen.
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Kim, this one made the back of my skull tingle. What a perfect conjuring of a monster from the deep!
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Wiw, that’s
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Your comments have made my day, Jade! Thank you!
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My pleasure (and fright!) Kim.
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Wow, a spectacular tale told in 44 words. Stunning KIm!
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Thank you, Linda!
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Aye, there be krakens (not that I know what they are!) Wonderfully descriptive verse, Kim.
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Thank you, Bev! The kraken originated in Norwegian myth. It’s a huge sea monster. The Kraken Wakes is a science fiction novel by John Wyndham,
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I like the thought of the kraken causing all those waves.
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Thanks Frank.
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Luv the lines where alliterations adds its musical taunts.
Happy Monday. Thanks for droppinv by tobread mine
Much✏love
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Thank you, Gillena. Much love coming back to you.
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I enjoyed all the sounds it helps build up that roar.
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Thank you, Truedessa!
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A true tempest! Sounds like you have one brewing outdoors now too. So descriptive, nicely done.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat. Yes, it was a wild night and very cold this morning, but calmer.
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And what a tempest this is! I love the sounds in this part:
Its growl grows, rocks and rolls
waves into oceanic roar,
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Thank you, Grace!
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I really liked this short poem.
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Thank you!
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a nice antidote to our fiery infernos! You tell the tale with flamboyant joy 🙂
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Thank you, Kate.
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welcome
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Dream or real, it bodes ill, the power of nature will out, even when cornered.
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There’s no stopping nature.
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So true.
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The sea awakens as a kraken is the most magical line! I love the seismic tempest it grows to. This is profound.
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Thank you, Victoria.
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Norse-like with the alliteration and all. Fun myth
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Thanks Sabio!
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The Tempest for sure!
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Wow! This is amazing imagery for a short poem. Also, kraken was a new word for me!
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Thank you, Sara.
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Wonderful! I love the imagery here–it is so vivid!
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Thanks Merril!
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