beach diamonds
a new day crystallized
in sunny surf foam
Jane Reichhold
caught in the curl of a wave
rolled by a whisper of wind
dervishes whirling
– seeking a higher consciousness
third eye opens
Chèvrefeuille
red sun on the horizon
observing a fresh new world
watch birth and death:
the lotus has already
opened its flower
Soseki Natsume (Tr. Soiku Shigematsu)
woken by a drop of dew
slipping between its petals
The wind from Mt. Fuji
I put it on the fan.
Here, a souvenir from Edo
Basho (Tr. Ryu Yotsuya)
a treasure kept for summer
susurration of late snow
cold spring breeze
makes the cherry blossom shiver
one heartbeat long
Chèvrefeuille
a flurry of pink petals
courtesans blush with delight
flute melodies
across green ocean waves
spring meadows
Jane Reichhold
the sweet scent of sakura
riding a whisper of wind
Kim M. Russell, 2nd February 2020
My response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #114 Renga With: beach diamonds
In this weekend’s meditation the challenge is to create a renga with several haiku poets by adding the two-lined stanzas to each given haiku. We may choose our own sequence but must start with the first given haiku: ‘beach diamonds, by Jane Reichhold.
Wonderful second stanzas all!
~cie~
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Thank you, Cara!
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fabulous imager and emotions! (@—->—-)
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Thank you Dorna!
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This was amazingly beautiful. Your renga stanzas really pulled the haiku together. Love it
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Thank you! 🙂
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