ripening crop
ripples in the breeze
scent of harvest
Kim M. Russell, 21st July 2020
My response to Carpe Diem Exploring the Beauty of Haiku #1828 Baransu (balance)
In a new episode of this month’s theme, we are exploring the beauty of haiku with a challenge to create a haiku with the ‘baransu’ (balance) technique.
Chèvrefeuille compared this technique to creating a tan renga, in which we try to create the second stanza by association with the scenes in the first stanza. With the ‘baransu’ technique, we are doing the same thing, but by association with the separated lines of the haiku, to bring balance to our haiku.
writing in north norfolk 
I love that there still are harvests.
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I like to see the farmers at harvest time, but the big tractors can be a nuisance on our narrow country lanes.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #3: Kim Russell’s latest haiku for Carpe Diem!
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many thanks for the reblog, Frank!
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My pleasure, Kim! 😀
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Lovely to see the ripples in ripening crops Kim! Hope all is well with you and enjoy the rest of your day 🤗💖 xxx
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Thanks Xenia, you too!🤓❤xxx
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Thank you Kim! 🙂💜🙋♀️ xxx
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I always love to see the bales of hay in the fields on the side of the road.
~Cie from Poetry of the Netherworld~
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Thank you, Cara. I wonder when Kristjaan all post another prompt.
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