Beethoven shouted
his incomprehensible joy,
a wind that dared
the whole world
to dance helter-skelter,
glitter on the river,
to dance as melody,
irresistible harmony,
a symphony
to nature’s inhuman splendour:
the gust,
the tide,
the breaking vine
in the figure of a dance.
Kim M. Russell. 7th January 2021

My response to Poets and Storytellers United Weekly Scribblings #51: Looking Back and Writing Forward, also linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night
Magaly is back with the first Weekly Scribblings of 2021 and a choice of challenges from 2020 prompts, ‘looking back and writing forward’. What a tough choice! But I finally decided on one from her list: Weekly Scribblings #43: Found Poems and Erasures. I took a chance on my very thick copy of Edwin Morgan’s Collected poems, opened it at random, right in the middle of ‘The Cape of Good Hope (1955) III ‘A Dream at the Mysterious Barricades’. Here’s a little New Year’s treat to go with it.
Lovely poem, Kim and so appropriate for the times.
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Thank you, Jane.
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🙂
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Beautiful, Kim: let’s hope the Woke brigade don’t succeed in ‘cancelling’ him!
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Thank you, Ingrid! If the Woke brigade attacks any of our composers, artists or poets, I shall be very annoyed.
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They already have…there have been calls to cancel Beethoven. As if we didn’t have enough problems with the far right 🤦🏽♀️
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What?!
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You might choose not to read this if you don’t want to get angry: https://www.vox.com/switched-on-pop/21437085/beethoven-5th-symphony-elitist-classism-switched-on-pop
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Oh dear!
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Lovely!
Could you please explain what the process was here? Why is there redacted text?
Sincerely,
David
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Thank you, David! If you click on the link to the past prompt I chose (Weekly Scribblings #43: Found Poems and Erasures), you will find an explanation of this kind of ‘found poem’. I don’t often work with erasures but prefer to write found poems, haiku and other micro or short poetry found in other writing, which could be a longer poem or a piece of prose. Magaly is the queen of erasure or ‘black-out’ poetry,. 🙂
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Brilliant example of this form. I love found poetry, although I’ve not done much erasure.
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Thank you, Marilyn. I haven’t done much erasure either, but I love found poetry.
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Luv the way you fetched such a lovely poem found
Happy you dropped by my blog
Best wishes for a happy 2021
much love…
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Much love and a happy New Year, Gillena!
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Gorgeous poem, Kim – and ‘joy’ is certainly the word for that flash mob video!
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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It’s a treat indeed, Kim. I like the found poetry, folk try very hard to make it right, often pretty like you made this one.
Good job! Thanks for the digital cut and stack, very nice.
: )
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Thank you, Jim!
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Kim, this is beyond wonderful! I know how difficult creating good blackout poetry can be, and this isn’t just good but great. Before I saw the note and the image, I had no idea that it was found poetry–the poem is so smooth, so natural. It even made me wanting to listen to some Beethoven. Your poem speaks of a sort of bliss the right music can bring out of us. Thank you for the reminder!
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Wow, what a lovely response, Magaly! Thank you so much for your kind comments.
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This is a spectacular erasure poem!M
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Thank you, Helen!
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I so love erasures and am amazed at what some can find. Yours is wonderful.
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Thank you kindly, Lisa.
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This is absolutely spectacular, Kim 😀 I hope the Woke brigade don’t succeed in cancelling him! 💝
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Thank you, Sanaa. From an article Ingrid sent me, it seems they are already trying. 😦
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wonderful word dance in this erasure poem – it never even lost the rhythm
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Thank you, Laura, that’s a wonderful comment, especially s I have lost my physical rhythm.
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You nailed this erasure, KR. All (well, almost all) of my erasures suck. My hat’s off.
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Thankyou so much, Ron! None of your writing sucks – I always enjoy it.
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this is so beautiful, it relays the sheer joy evident in your video … bring tears to my eyes!
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Thank you, Kate! Sadly, it’s not my video, just one I saw some tiem ago and found on YouTube.
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I knew that, but you found it to share 🙂
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The joy is visually stunning and the poem is amazing. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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You welcome. 🙂
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Beethoven was a rocker and roller at heart. Thanks for getting to his heart here. Roll over, Beethoven! Also Kim sounds like your making wonderful use of your lockdown time!
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I wrote a piece of flash fiction about Beethoven, which was published in an anthology. I might scan it and post it at the weekend.
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I hope you do 🙂
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I’v e reblogged the original, which I wrote in 2016. An abridged version was published by Paper Swans Press in 2017.
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Just read it. Wow!
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Thank you, Lisa!
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Most welcome, Kim.
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Found poetry from book & movie titles can be fun. We did an erasure prompt at d’Verse years ago. I chose a page from McCarthy’s BLOOD MERIDIAN and it was fun to do. I adore your poem. I used to take prose paragraphs written by friends, and but in line breaks, creating poetry. They were amazed. By the way, I want to thank you for your enthusiasm and fellowship, following me at my photography site, and writing remarkable comments here at d’Verse. You are much appreciated.
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Thanks Glenn. I appreciate your words and love your poetry and photography too. I’m looking forward to the next OLN live, so I can hear your voice again.
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Beautiful piece, Kim. You mastered the erasure form of poetry.
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Thank you, Eugenia!
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Lovely poem, and thanks for the video. It never gets old.
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Thank you, Xan! Flash mobs are magical.
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Your poem is a joyful read!
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Thank you!
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A beautiful poem and one of my favorite pieces of music! So interesting that the little one were expressing freely and totally uninhibited what the adults were more reserved!
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I’m delighted you enjoyed both poem and music, Dwight! No flash mobs during this pandemic. I hope they will spring up all over the world when it’s over.
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yes, I hope so to… I shared the music on my FB page!
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He shouted indeed! (K)
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I think he shouted because of the loud music that was always in his head, pleading to be let out.
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I’m sure that’s right. I’m glad he let us hear it too.
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Such a beautiful poem!
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Thank you, Lucy!
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Love this. It speaks to me as a dancer and as someone who needs some fun today. Thanks for sharing your joyful words.
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Thank you, Ali!
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I had Ode to Joy in mind as I read your lovely piece. It reminded me my feet still had plenty of dance left to them yet. I love how the optimism here seems to have a rebel streak. I think I’ll decide to rebel a little this morning and dance too, for all the beautiful things that bring me joy.
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Thank you, Rommy. I’m glad you’ve decided to rebel and dance!
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I am quietly listening to jazz while reading poetry today. Two of my top three favorite things to do. Music must be in the cosmos because it was my subject for this OLN. This is a strong wonderful celebration of the power and joy of Ludwig Von’s inspired work — the triumph of his spirit. Fine piece you’ve written here Kim.
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Thank you, Rob!
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I’m intrigued by this erasure form now! How creative, loved it! 💕
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I read this not knowing it was a found poem…..and could not tell! Good work, Kim….have you watched “Mozart in the Jungle” on Amazon Prime? You might it enjoy it .Jim
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Cheers Jim!
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looking back gives us the empathy and writing forward can bring us new beginnings…
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True!
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