The souls of soles, when bare,
kiss earth, and sink into its vibrations.
Shoes dull the senses, feet despair
of boots and pumps, need sensations
of soil and moisture, and the flow of air
around each toe. Feet welcome liberation
every summer; the change from bare
white trotters to tanned exultation,
collecting grains of sand without a care
and rinsing clean in salty ocean.
Kim M. Russell, 8th April 2021
Image by Genevieve Dallaire on Unsplash
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Meeting the Bar: The Body & Poetry
Grace is back with a question: What does our body have to do with writing poetry? She says that we know our bodies intimately, whether we like it or not, and there are poems waiting to come out of our bodies and their experiences.
Grace has shared examples from poems by a range of poets including Margaret Atwood, Marge Piercy and Lucille Clifton, as well as the wonderfully titled ‘I’ve Grown Very Hairy’ by Yehuda Amichai, to inspire us to write poems about the body parts (e.g. eyes, hands, feet) as a metaphor and/or story.
Ah Kim…. as soon as you started this, first thought that jumped into my head was my bare feet in the sand along the ocean at our beloved Provincetown on Cape Cod. Hah! You did not disappoint….you went to that feeling of sand and salty ocean water on your toes too!
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Thank you, Lill. I could do with some salty ocean water on my sore toe.
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This is absolutely fantastic, Kim! 😀 So much to love here especially; “The souls of soles, when bare,
kiss earth,” and “collecting grains of sand without a care and rinsing clean in salty ocean.” You have made me view feet in a whole new and different light. 😍😍
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Thank you, Sanaa. Feet aren’t very pretty, mainly functional, and they often ache!
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‘the change from bare
white trotters to tanned exultation’
– this really made me smile, my mother-in-law always describes me as ‘white as a cheese’ until I start to tan 🤣
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Sometimes I think only my feet tan – or maybe they’re just dirty!
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I miss this feeling – feet/soul of soles on the water and kissing the earth. I love that feeling of liberation and exultation.
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Roll on summer!
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That first stanza! ZING! The rhythm. It swings and rocks your tongue, and then it rhymes, too.
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That’s how I hope my feet are feeling – if they’ve read it too!
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You’ll have to put your feet up, and read them your poem. 🙂
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Kim, feet truly are the unsung heroes of the body. You couldn’t keep shoes on my feet as a kid and they reveled in their freedom. The beach is pretty much the only place they fly free anymore and they love it. Excellent tribute poem!
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Thanks Lisa!
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You’re very welcome and hope your toe gets the remedy it needs, my friend.
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🙏
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The sand and the sea are host and blood of this footsy sacrament, Sandy toes across the world will savor!
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I can’t wait to walk on the beach again.
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I can feel the relief – and release – in this.
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Cheers Ken.
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Our feet work so hard for us, they occasionally deserve soothing. I felt the sand ‘tween my toes Kim… 🙂
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Bare soles, like bare souls, waiting to take these shoes off and walk barefoot. Still a ways away. Love your words!
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Thank you, Mary!
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You bare your feet, you bare your soul. Thirty years of almost nightly foot massages have certainly bonded My Beloved Sandra and me. Great write, KR. Free them piggies!
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I could do with a foot massage!
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Love this Kim. Mine are throbbing from overuse today. I hope yours feel better soon
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Thank you so much, Eric.
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My feet are always happier after a week at the beach. (K)
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A very lovely pondering on the captivity of feet in shoes and then their joyous summer liberation. My daughter would love this. She resents shoes immensely and is always asking “why doesn’t the dog have to wear shoes?”
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Thank you!
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Feet exhilarate in a walk along the beach…enjoyed it, Kim!
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Thanks Lynn!
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I love your barefoot adventures. Mine, unfortunately, ended when I stepped on a snake when mowing the lawn!
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Thanks Bev! I’m glad I don’t have snakes in our long grass!
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This poem and imagery made me smile SO much!
-David
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Thanks David!
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Walking barefoot must be one of the most freeing of feelings ………… Cheers!
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😊
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Oh, to dip my feet in the ocean again! So lovely Kim!
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Thank you, Linda. Summer is not far off now.😊
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There is something so grounding about walking around barefoot. I do always find the sharp stones or dropped screws however, and it’s slightly less centring when you’re hopping around swearing. I’ve yet to learn my lesson however.
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From teens to mid twenties I hardly ever wore shoes – just boots in winter. I didn’t notice much underfoot. These days I’m like the the princess in the story with the pea – I feel everything, even with shoes on!
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