The card on the noticeboard offered an introduction to crystal healing and dream interpretation. Aisling wrote the address in her notebook and returned to the house she shared with three students. She wouldn’t tell them. They would only laugh at her in the same way as they did at her herbal teas and potions.
That evening, the indigo sky was studded with stars as she drove her Mini out of town and parked up by a church – there were no other vehicles – and found the address on a path between arched ash trees, through which she saw the full moon, a silver balloon trapped in branches. The cottage windows were lit with the welcoming glow of candles. She knocked, waited a moment, and the door opened. A rosy-cheeked woman smiled with twinkling eyes and said, “If you are a dreamer, come in.”
Kim M. Russell, 12th April 2021
Image by Anne Nygård on Unsplash
Lilli is our host for Prosery, a new genre of creative writing originated by dVerse, which must be prose, not poetry, with a beginning, middle and end, no more than 144 words in length, and which must include the given line of poetry, exactly as the words are written in the line, although punctuation may be altered. This week Lill has chosen “If you are a dreamer, come in” from Shel Silverstein’s poem ‘Invitation’. The Irish name ‘Aisling’ means dream or vision.
I’m intrigued to know what happened next Kim…I love the hints at witchcraft and the occult.
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Thanks Ingrid. This is one I might consider developing.
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I’d love to take a class with this cheerful woman and especially in this setting! 🙂 Magical indeed. This descriptive phrase is just wonderful “the full moon, a silver balloon trapped in branches” —
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Thank you, Lill. We need more wise women in the world.
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It sounds exactly like she is someone seeking something… maybe the other students were just a little bit afraid and mocked her because of that.
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Thanks Bjorn – something to explore another time.
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My kind of story. Sounds like the beginning of a grand adventure!
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re very welcome.
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A cliffhanger, for sure! well penned.
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Thank you, Bev!
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did she quailify as a good witch? i want to know. great write.
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Thank you, Rog! I’m considering what might follow in this story.
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👍
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I did not get an occult vibe, rather a New Age welcome. When I was heavy into New Age, I remember the resistance, envy, and obstruction all about me. But awakening is worth the effort.
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Thanks Glenn. We tread a thin line between New Age and occult, but witchery is always present.
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Luv the moonshine.
Happy Monday
Much💛love
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Thank you, Gillena. Happy start of the week, with love!
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I find modern interpretations of witchery quite fascinating, especially when compared to what was considered ‘witchcraft’ four hundred years ago. You had local people sprinkling holy-water on their crops to keep the blight away, and prayers adapted into charms for healing. We’ve always attributed power to ritual.
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We need more witches in the world to show us the path back to nature.
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This is delightful! 🙂. Love the way the line fit snugly there at the end. Nice one.
Pat
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Thank you so much, Pat! 🙂
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This prompt has produced some beautiful pieces… yours was extra special! Thank-you.
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Thank you so much, Susan.
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This was a fantastical write, but I found it enchanting, not gothic. Well written Kim. Made me want to know more.
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Thank you, Rob. Although I love writing Gothic stories, this one took a slightly different route.
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Very nicely done Kim. I hope she find the healing she is lookin for!
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I think she will – and maybe more.
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A mystical read! Enjoyed the description and the irony of “parked up by a church.” I wonder if she will find the answers she seeks!
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Thank you for spotting the ironic parking, Tricia. One often finds the religious and the magical co-existing.
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✨ Yes! ✨
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So very intriguing and and strangely whimsical in an odd sense reaching into the imaginative conscience.
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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This needs a sequel.
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Thank you Mary. I am contemplating what might come next. 😉
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Enjoyed so much your picture of this young woman at the beginning of a new adventure❣️🙏
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Thank you, Cara. There might me more of this story some time in the future.
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A story from which to spring from…..and yet a complete story with a perfect ending, as she followed her heart.
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Thanks Mish. This story might grow legs.
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Kim, I love how we are left guessing at what happens next and whether there is anything supernatural involved.
Well done!
-David
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Thank you, David!
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I think something good will come up of this! I hope you do continue it. I’d like to know what happens.
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Thanks Merril!
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I too would love to know what she found inside. (K)
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Something for me to think about. 🙂
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I love the aura of mystery you have left us with Kim.
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Thank you, Linda.
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Oh yes, I’m with everyone, this must continue. I would love to meet one such as her.
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Thank you, Dale, I will try to find time to develop this story.
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Fun stuff! 🙂
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