I trail scorch marks in my wake as I breach each firebreak. My voracious carnassials devour every blade of grass and flower, the leaves on every shrub and tree. Once I charge, there’s no stopping me. But when you feel the biting chill of winter coming over the hill, you embrace my crackle and roar; my golden flame will always draw you to a bonfire or a hearth, to my lion tongue and lion heart. Kim M. Russell, 17th August 2022

For this week’s Poetics, Sarah asks us to choose one of the four elements: earth, water, wind and fire. I immediately thought of a wonderful birthday card I received when I was much younger, of Leo the lion, which inspired this poem. Sadly, I couldn’t find the original image, so I searched for something similar.
Wonderful 🦁
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Thank you Lesley!
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A fierce, powerful poem. I liked it a lot.
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Thank you,. Nitin!
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Wonderful indeed! You bring out the paradox of fire so nicely in this poem.
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Thank you so much!
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We are drawn to what terrifies us, but when what terrifies is drawn to us, it’s a different story.
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Oh, yes, the different aspects of fire! And your brilliant use of rhyme that flows so beautifully!
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You capture the fear of fire and also its pull. It’s terrifying and beautiful.
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I love your comparison of fire to a lion. So regal, so magnificent, so ravenous. To the lion-flame we might look like devotees. Or like lunch!
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this is Shay in WP clothing, in case you didn’t know
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Thanks Shay!
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This was wonderful Kim. I never knew what carnassials were! Ha! I loved the ending, especially your photo of the flaming lion. I will always see that now when I look into a fire ☺️💕
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Thanks Christine!
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What a great contrast showing Negative and Positive perspectives of fire!
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How beautifully you have penned this Kim. Love the contrast of the heat and cold in your poem.
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Thank you, Grace!
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Such an interesting connection and comparison you’ve made and the inspiration for your poem….how lovely to revive that image and memory.
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Thank you, Mish!
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This is so gorgeous! I’m delighted that you are writing again.
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Thank you, Marilyn. It feels good, but I’m taking it slowly and easing myself in with a few prompts a week.
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I love the contrast, Kim! Wonderful imagery.
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Thanks very much!
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My pleasure.
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Kim! You have fast become my favorite story teller! xox
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Thank you, Jane! xox
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