Somewhere in the countryside, a raucous cockerel crows, roused and astonished by rose- gold kisses that burnish the sky; they set the frazzled foliage on fire, untie twisted tendrils of rising mist to offer up the magical gift of a morning in late summer. Kim M. Russell, 23rd August 2022

Linda is our host for this Monday’s Quadrille, which she has named after one of my favourite hymns that we sang at school, ‘Morning Has Broken’. The words are by Eleanor Farjeon and were set to a traditional Scottish Gaelic tune known as ‘Bunessan’. It became an even bigger favourite when it was recorded by Cat Stevens.
Linda has given us examples of poems about morning by Richard Wilbur, Billy Collins, T.S. Eliot and Mary Oliver. Our job is to write quadrilles, 44-word poems that include the word ‘morning’.
So much fabulous alliteration and assonance here! Just beautiful, Kim.
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Thank you, De!
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I like the rhymes and almost-rhymes. The run-on is very deft too.
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Thanks Jane!
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You described pure bliss.
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Thank you Petru!
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Whammo!!
Love this in its entirety, but I’m blown away by those untied misty tendrils, and the fabuloso alliteration in the line that precedes them
You rock, Sister..
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Thanks so much, Ron! I always love your comments.
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Oh Kim, this is full of such vivid imagery. LOVE!
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Thank you, Linda, I’m thrilled you love it!
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A wonderful poem, Kim. Your images are great. This line could have a double inference as well: they set the frazzled foliage on fire,
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Thank you, Dwight. Sadly, and unusually for the UK, we have had fires this summer, even here in Norfolk and not so far away from us.
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Woe! I am sure that gets unsettling at times.
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It certainly does.
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A magical gift indeed, as is your lovely poem.
–Shay
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Thank you, Shay!
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Beautiful descriptions. The poem has a nice flowing motion.
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Thank you so much!
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Kim, I like your magical morning poem. It is a magical thought. Cat Stevens song was on my favorite list also. I thought of it right away when I saw the prompt.
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Thank you, Jim!
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Beautifully written poem.
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Thank you kindly!
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Wonderful alliteration Kim. I loved the cockerel. I actually had Morning Has Broken sung by the choir at my wedding. ☺️
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Thank you, Christine. That hymn can be sung at weddings, christenings and funerals.
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Very beautifully written.
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Thank so much!
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I like these lines, “they set the frazzled foliage on fire,
untie twisted tendrils of rising mist” – great images and fun to read out loud.
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Thank you Ali!
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Kisses that set foliage on fire, I can see it it flaming gold. Beautiful, Kim.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Truly magical, Kim, and the alliterations and rhymes are the rose kisses that burnish your quadrille!
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Thank you so much, Punam!
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My pleasure.
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Enjoyed your detailed description and imagery. I was channeling somewhere in the trees as well, sounds so nice! 💓
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Thank you, Tricia!
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My pleasure, Kim! ❣️
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What a beautiful sunrise and masterfully penned.
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Thank you kindly.
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Beautiful imagery. A lovely summer morning. 🙂
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Truly magical – what a beautiful scene you’ve captured.
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Thank you!
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I found myself swaying as I read this lovely poem.
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My work is done!
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The way you use alliteration and assonance made the cockerel come alive… I wish to run barefoot in your late summer scene.
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Cheers Björn!
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Such beautiful language and images, Kim. The alliteration and assonance that others mentioned is subtle–just adds to the magic!
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Thank you Merril!
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You’re welcome!
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Such loveliness, WOW.
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Thanks so much!
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You’re most welcome, my pleasure.
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In addition to your beautiful imagery, Kim, I love the way this poem sounds!
❤
David
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Exquisite. 💕
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Thank you, Lesley!
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I love mornings like that 💕
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…your poem placed me there.
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