Mist – A Haiku
translucent dawning
a light, flimsy mist swallows
pieces of old cardboard

Granite – A Didactic Cinquain
granite
impervious, grey
stand, shine, survive
symbolising all things unweathered
rock
Kim M. Russell (and some artificial intelligence), 23rd February 2023

Image by Jeppe Hove Jensen on Unsplash
It’s Thursday and we’re Meeting the Bar over at the dVerse Poets Pub with Björn. He invites us to experiment with artificial intelligence in writing poetry, and has shared some sites that we can use. He says we are free to choose our tools and wants us to edit the poem and/or mix it with our own words.
I tried a few of the AI sites, with a variety of forms and words, and the poems they produce are very formulaic, often make no sense, and will need a lot of edits.
Here are two micro poems created using AI. They seem to work better.
“Pieces of old cardboard”❤️
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Yes the pieces of old cardboard really worked.
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That’s what I thought!
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Kim, which program did you use to do the short forms? I’d like to check it out.
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I think it is the first one Bjorn suggested in his email. To be honest, I was just noodling about. I didn’t realise we had to include the original AI poem or mention the poets we chose either. I admit, it wasn’t really my cup of tea.
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Lisa, it’s one I found myself, https://www.poem-generator.org.uk/
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OK cool! Thank you.
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You’re very welcome.
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I had to go and look for it!
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It’s got a lot more choices than the other ones. I did a limerick using it 🙂
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Those pieces of cardboard speak voulmes, Kim! Splendid work done 😍😍
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Thank you Sanaa!
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I can’t decide, which is worse, the AI’s poetry or its maths. I think in terms of composition it must have been winging it.
The mist swallowing pieces of old cardboard made me laugh actually, it’s such a daft (and funny) image. So it wasn’t all in vain 🙂
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😊
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I actually love the first one! Is it all AI?
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It is Lill! Except for the punctuation.
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Love the micro poems and cannot believe it’s all AI. Whoa!
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I only tweaked the punctuation in the micro poems, Grace.
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These work well, I especially like the second one. (K)
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Thanks Kerfe, on behalf of myself and the AI! The shorter the poem the better it is. Although I much prefer to write my own from scratch.
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and you do so beautifully!
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Beautiful writing in both haiku! ❤
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Thank you Layla. It was the AI that created them – I just gave it the words. 🙂
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Love the micro poems and cannot believe it’s all AI. Whoa!
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