A city empty of children in a cold, dystopian shell (Janice Turner, The Times, 15th April 2023)
At the end of the war, after years of hiding,
Bombs had destroyed their homes.
Children and mothers returned to a subsiding
Dystopian shell, to cities of bare bones.
Enemy soldiers came, destroyed and, conscienceless,
Fleeing the scenes of devastation, they are
Gone, they do not care about the emptiness,
Hunger and despair they left behind, whether
It would leave survivors hopeless, the afterbirth of
Jet contrails still fading in the silent sky,
Knowing it would take years to clear the earth of
Long-lasting mines and brick and rubble. Why
Men have to fight and kill, destroy futures,
Naïve, unworldly children, I don’t know – people who
Open their hearts and arms to strangers.
Plaintive cries roll among remains of walls, echo
Quavering into infinity. War does no right, only wrong,
Reaching far into crumbing hearts and souls,
Stealing their poems and their songs.
Though they are now ragged and cold cold,
Untended, thirsty, unfertilised for so long,
Verbs, nouns and adjectives will not wilt,
Words have lives of their own; they stand strong,
Xanadu is within reach, the city can be rebuilt.
Young and ambitious, they just have to remember:
Zealousness is the first step towards a new future.
Kim M. Russell, 18th April 2023

Image by Olga Drach on Unsplash
It’s day eighteen of NaPoWriMo and our challenge is to write an abecedarian poem – a poem in which the word choice follows the words/order of the alphabet. We could write a very strict abecedarian poem, in which there are twenty-six words in alphabetical order, or one in which each line begins with a word that follows the order of the alphabet. Ee have been given examples by Jessica Greenbaum, Howard Nemerov and John Bosworth.
An impressive feat! You’ve managed to express a lot and with some poignant imagery despite the difficulties of the challenge.
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I’m smiling!
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Oh dear war indeed is so sad and devastating; but you’ve written it poetically well with its beautiful flow…
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Thank you Mich.
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An ugly reality told beautifully Kim and with great skill! 👍👍👌👌👏👏😁😁
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Thank you Ken!
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You’re very welcome Kim! 👍😁🙏
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The world is hard to take these days. (K)
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It is, Kerfe.
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