It’s a magical hue,
indigo,
teetering between twilight
and midnight,
blue and violet,
the tint of an iris
that blooms in the garden
or the depth of an eye.
Soft as velvet,
it’s the colour of the moon’s
favourite gown.
She wears it well.
Kim M. Russell, 24th February 2025

It’s Monday and, at the dVerse Poets Pub, Lillian has us writing 44-word quadrilles incorporating the word ‘indigo’.
I took the 6th to 8th lines from a poem I wrote for one of Sarah’s prompts back in 2021: https://writinginnorthnorfolk.com/2021/05/11/indigo/
Oh… the gown of the moon, I really love that thought
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Thank you, Björn.
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Me, too.💙
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Indeed she does. Well done, Kim.
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Thank you, Shay!
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“It’s a magical hue,
indigo,
teetering between twilight
and midnight,”
YES! and when I thought your write couldn’t get any more descriptively beautiful, the moon’s gown!
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Thank you, Lill. Indigo is my favorite colour after all!
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Kim such a lovely description of indigo. You give it a distinct character beyond color.
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Thank you, Lisa. I just love indigo.
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You’re very welcome.
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A lovely gown for a beautiful moon. Bravo, Kim!
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Thanks so much, Nolcha!
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Your imagery is so brilliant and bright!
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Thanks Christine.
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Woow…i can feel this.
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Thank you, Elise.
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I love the last line along with the moon’s favorite gown…
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Thank you, Christine.
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Hi Christine. WordPress will not let me comment on your quadrille, so I’m commenting here.
As someone who has an indigo soul, I enjoyed all the blues in your quadrille, Christine, from the ‘blue of the sky to the deep azure sea’.
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Thank you Kim!
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My pleasure, Christine.
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teetering between twilight
and midnight,
I liked this line for its merit…then realised…what a lovely homage to the moon Kim…..
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Thank you, Ain.
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So many beautiful, Kim. I absolutely love how you dressed the moon.
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Sorry….should read “So many beautiful descriptions of blue!”
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Thank you, Mish.
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the moon’s gown. A lovely image
much♡love
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Thank you, Gillena, and much love winging its way to you.
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Thats beautiful Kim – I love it!
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Thank you so much, Kim!
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She does wear it well….now, I have Rod Stewart”s songs looping in my head
I sure do want you to know that you wear it well
There ain’t a lady in the land so fine
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Thank you, Truedessa. Funnily enough, Rod’s song did occur to me.
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Love the closing lines.
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Thank you, Maria.
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Gorgeous poetry, Kim!
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Thanks Lynn!
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i like the idea of the moon wearing and indigo gown!
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Thank you, Dwight.
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You are very welcome!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you very much, Frieda!
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Wonderful imagery.
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Thank you, Judy.
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Very beautiful poem, so vivid in, imageries! Loved it.
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Thank you very much!
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Absolutely gorgeous, Kim!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you so much, Yvette!
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the tint of an iris
that blooms in the garden
or the depth of an eye.
as an iris lover, and an eye-gazer, this was always going to be my favourite part!
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Thanks so much, Kathy.
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Same here! It’s brilliant and lyrical and provocative.
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“it’s the colour of the moon’s
favourite gown.” My favourite line is this beautiful quadrille, Kim.
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That makes me very happy, Punam!
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OH KIM ~~~ this is a luscious Madrigal.
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Thank you, dear Helen!
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A beautifully laid out pattern for the moons gown! Very enjoyable, Kim.
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Thank you very much, Carol!
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Kim, I love how you bring indigo to life, blending nature and emotion. The line “she wears it well” is a perfect, gentle closing.
Much love,David
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Thank you very much, David!
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I love the image of the moon wearing an indigo gown. She wears it well indeed!
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Thanks so much, Cris!
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everyone has already said what i was thinking about your beautiful indigo poem. so, i say, “ditto!”
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I think since reading this, whenever indigo is mentioned, I will definitely be thinking of it as ‘the Moon’s favourite gown’. Nicely done!
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Thank you!
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I love the image of the moon’s favorite gown. Great poem, Kim!
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Thank you, Sara!
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Wonderful picture 😍
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Thanks so much!
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