This being human is a circus trick.
Day after day you perfect your act:
a t i g h t r o p e w a l k
between now and then,
a flourish,
and then back again,
one foot in front of the other.
It’s juggling swords,
eating fiery words,
putting your head in a lion’s mouth
and inhaling its meaty breath.
It’s the highs
and lows
of the flying trapeze,
the bearded lady’s s l o w s t r I p t e a s e,
and the absurdity of being a clown,
keeping the audience laughing while you drown
in your own tears.
At the end of the show,
after the final bow,
you remove the greasepaint,
extinguish the glow,
and get the bus home
alone.
Kim M. Russell, 16th March 2021
For my own prompt at dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: The Art of Being Human
‘Tight-Rope Walker’ by Jean-Louis Forain, ca. 1885, found in Wikimedia Commons
This is gorgeously worded, Kim 😀 You had me at “Day after day you perfect your act: a tightrope walk
between now and then.” The poem resonates as nowadays ever since Covid, I have learned not to take things for granted, to make more time for people I care about and yes, to keep hope alive 💝💝
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Thanks so much, Sanaa! 😉
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I love this metaphor! Like Sanaa, I was intrigued from the first line and loved it from the second line.
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, Jenna!
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I love the metaphor you selected… the struggle and how in the end you are all alone. The crying clown especially talked to me.
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That makes me happy!
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The metaphor is too true throughput this poem. Extremely well written! The isolation and dark moments give in—for that is being human and raw. Real. Days don’t always come easy but when pulling off the facade we wear, they do get better. Beautifully said!
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Thank you very much, Lucy, I love it when my poems are appreciated!
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❤️❤️
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This poem is brilliant in its theatricality, Kim: I felt like I was there at the show, especially with lines like:
‘putting your head in a lion’s mouth
and inhaling its meaty breath.’ (shudder!)
I like the stretched out words as well, and the bizarre spectacle of ‘the bearded lady’s s l o w s t r I p t e a s e’
followed by the pathos of solitude at the end. Masterful!
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Your comment has made my evening – and made me blush, Ingrid! Thank you so very much!
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Not at all, I meant it!
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This is one outstandingly well-developed, multi-faceted metaphor KR; one which i’m finding it difficult to measure up to. Thanks for the inspirational prompt!
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Thank you for your lovely comment, Ron, and for your workout of a poem!
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This is wonderful Kim. It reminded me of those expressions, Thers no business like show business and the show must go on. These lines were so poignant
“keeping the audience laughing while you drown
in your own tears.”
It brought a tear to my eyes 😢
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Thank you kindly, Christine!
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LOVE this take on the prompt, Kim. And aren’t you the one who does not like clowns? I love the ending….at the end of the day, the grease paint comes off and we go home to the solitary and comfortable place we call home where we can be ourselves and avoid the roar of the crowd and the smell of the greasepaint! 🙂 I actually contemplated using the circus for my post and then thought about the merry-go-round idea.
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Thanks Lill. Yes, I am afraid of clowns and not fond of circuses with animals in them, although I was entranced by Cirque du Soleil. Iwas over tired last night and got up later than usual this morning, but I’ll be over to read soon.
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powerful poem, stunning metaphor, expressive layout and such an accurate depiction of the highs and lows, the juggling and lions mouth … then we go home alone to a safer sanctuary where the circus continues in our head!
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Thank you, Kate!
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A troubled journey that doesn’t end especially well, but beautifully written, Kim. The bus ride home and alone makes me want to weep!
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Thank you, Bev.
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Oh Kim I’m right there with you tonight. Fantastic poem, you really knocked it out of the park. I loved the images of sticking your head in the lion’s mouth, and could almost smell the meat breath. The last word on its on line really punched home.
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Thank you so much, Carol.
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This business of being human is a circus with three rings of feats and foolery which always end by taking the bus home alone. Again. Says it all for me.
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Cheers Brendan!
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i am right there with my head in the lins mouth it is how i feel a lot of the time recntly. great poem
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Thank Rog. I’ve felt like that too.
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Great job. Love the two stretched out phrases.
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Thank you, Ron!
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“the absurdity of being a clown,
keeping the audience laughing while you drown”
Really resonates as I think of all of the comedians over the years who’ve hidden their sorrows so we could laugh. The circus show is what my old job reminded me of. Every day felt like taming lions.
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Thank you, Lisa. A lot of my time teaching was taming lions, both pupils and the management team.
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You’re welcome, Kim.
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Very nicely done Kim,
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Thank you, Dwight!
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wow… that’s brilliant!
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Thank you, Kate!
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We all have our facades and do put on a show at times. The ending is raw in it’s truth, very well written!! 👏👏👏
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Thanks so much, Tricia!
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Yes I guess we are all faced with catching the bus home alone in the end. Your poem really brings that stark reality to the fore.
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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The smell of the crowd on the 118 bus home eh.
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Enjoyed the show, Kim…lions and all! Awesome prompt and post tonight…thanks 🙂
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Thank you so much, Lynn!
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I love it. Perfect metaphor for life.
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Thank you so much!
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Kim,
Brilliant, but end made me a bit sad.
Although it’s true. We all die alone.
Yours,
David
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Thanks for such an appreciative comment, David, and I’m sorry my poem made you sad.
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No, that’s good! I’m glad it made me feel 💗
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If only we could stop performing and find out what’s beneath all the layers we put on.. (k)
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Yes, but that might make us less human.
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Or more human. Young children are just who they are, even when they are pretending. And they seem much more human than most adults, who have so many masks they don’t even remember what’s underneath it all.
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Very true!
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I love the way the rhymes sneak their way into the free verse format, it’s very circus like, evoking chaos and order and the unexpected waiting just inside the next tent.
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Thank you so much, Xan, for close reading and appreciative analysis.
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Absolutely true and beautifully put. This really points out life’s absurdity.
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Thank you, Robin.
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“Keeping the audience laughing g while you drown in your own tears”
Kim I love this whole metaphor of the circus!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Oh, this is wonderful. I loved it!
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Thank you, Sherry!
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Your metaphor is great, but I wonder of we ever reach the end of that tightrope.
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I wonder about that too.
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the circus metaphor is wonderful – all the different shows and these superb lines
“It’s the highs
and lows
of the flying trapeze,
the bearded lady’s s l o w s t r I p t e a s e,
and the absurdity of being a clown,”
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Thank you, Laura.
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Kim, I’ve reread this to enjoy the wordplay and the imaginations so real. This is an exceptional creation. Being human is a circus trick, for those who can dare and later remain alone after the show…
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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Any time..
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I too was drawn to the lines, “and the absurdity of being a clown, keeping the audience laughing while you drown”. Furthermore, the ending which I interpreted as how we all leave this world alone. Fantastic metaphor!
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Thanks so much!
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A sad, but certainly not inaccurate expression of the day to day challenge to be present and civil — even if you’d rather scream!
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That’s what it feels like, Rob.
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This is absolute perfection–mirrors my life 100%–and exquisitely penned, as well. Bravo.
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Thank you so much, Zelda Rene!
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You are most welcome!!
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Creative writing and true – some days it does indeed feel like a tightrope walk – it is all about balance
Now, I have the lyric “send in the clowns” playing in my head
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Thank you, Truedessa. I too had that song in my head after writing it!
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Such a human metaphor Kim. We are all out there performing in one way or another. Many as clowns, masking their own fragility and loneliness.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Sean.
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