The moon, like a cataract in the eye of night, casts her milky tract of light on a rookery of nests; their twiggy bulks seem to rest in the fingertips of branches. Below, the night’s chill breath petrifies fierce arum spears still clenched tight like fists where death has left its earthy taint among bits of rapture from the rookery, splinters of moonlight and the remains of night. Kim M. Russell, 27th April 2023

Image by Sylvain Brison on Unsplash
It’s Thursday, day twenty-seven of NaPoWriMo, and the optional daily prompt was inspired by Bernadette Mayer’s poem ‘The Lobelias of Fear’. The challenge is to write our own poems entitled ‘“The ________ of ________’, in which the first blank is a very particular kind of plant or animal, and the second blank is an abstract noun. Poems should contain at least one simile that plays on double meanings or otherwise doesn’t quite make ‘sense’, and describe things or beings from very different times or places as co-existing in the same space.
Chilling and striking imagery, I especially enjoyed this part : “Below, the night’s chill breath petrifies fierce arum spears”, as well as just your use of the word “rookery”, it really feels like a centerpiece, sticking out as on display – in a good way.
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Thank you!
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Love the splinters of moonlight!
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Thank you Romana!
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The images in the first verse are excellent- the moon as a cataract with milky light!
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Thank you Rajani!
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