Give me a city of bridges and sighs,
Shimmering water under cloudless skies,
Flocking pigeons in St Mark’s Square
Fed by the crowds of tourists there.
Give me the surprise of a piazzale,
The clanging of the bell in the Campanile,
Echoes of gondoliers in the early morning haze
And overcrowded vaporetti in the watery maze.
Give me a labyrinth of shadowy alleys,
Casanova’s ghost haunting campi and calli.
Give me shops full of colourful Murano glass
Or a marvellous miscellany of carnival masks.
Give me an ice cream from a gelateria,
Wine and a meal in a friendly pizzeria.
Give me shimmering water under cloudless skies
In Venice, the city of bridges and sighs.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics Take Me Along!
This evening at the dVerse Poets Pub we are writing travelogue poetry with Lillian, who has asked us to recall our vacations and/travel memories and write a poem that takes us to a place where we’ve been, describes a place, a culture, a person we met somewhere in our country, city, or abroad.
Lovely! The rhyme scheme really suits the poem. I can imagine those bridges and sighs. The carnival masks are especially vivid, too.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Marilyn, I’m delighted you enjoyed it.
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Oooooh thank you! Venice is a place I’ve always wanted to visit and you’ve just taken me there!! LOVE the description….especially the circling around to the phrase “city of bridges and sighs”….just like taking a gondolier ride around those wonderful waterways and ending back at our starting point to hop off and continue exploring! Wonderful!! So glad you joined in on this prompt, Kim! PS: photos are a delight!
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Thank you Lillian! I did have better photos but I lost them when my old computer died.
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oh that is so sad to lose photos to the computer gods….I learned the hard way too and now have automatic back-up in the “cloud” — wherever that is!
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I need to sort out my cloud. ‘Hey, you, get off my cloud!’
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Ah Venice, only been there in the movies–dozens of times. As stated prior, this perfectly shaped & rhymed poetic is a joy–& it really has a genuine sense of place. I remember finally visiting NYC years ago, & having the rush of familiarity, since I had seen the city in hundreds of films; smile.
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Thank you, Glenn. I enjoyed writing it – it reminded me how much I love it. Venice was the first place we ever visited in Italy for my husband’s fiftieth birthday. We’ve been about five times since and it hasn’t lost its magic.
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This is stunning! Such beautiful words, with wonderful meter and rhyme, really captures Venice in all its charm!
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Thank you!
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Lovely! There’s a real sense of the rhythms of this bustling city!
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Thank you, Freya!
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Venice is one of the places that has always called to me but have never been. Your words conjure up the ebb and flow of human tides.
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Thank you, Brian!
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Lovely description of Venice. A place I have not visited but hope to one day.
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Oh yes, you must go!
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You did a wonderful job on this! I visited Venice twice and found your poem and rhymes to be lovely. I love your references to the wonders in the city. I felt as if I were on a gondola being taken about and showed the amazing things the city offeres.
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Thanks, Toni. Venice is very special to me.
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Oh, goodness. I have never been, and now I want to go – with you. Such gorgeous language here. Sigh, indeed.
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Thank you, De! I could have written about a few wonderful places I have been but Venice is always in my heart 🙂
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Sigh.. this
reminds me..
i’ve only been
to Disney World
and Washington DC..
spoiLed by the most Beautiful
Beaches and River front
LandS in Panhandle
oF Florida
alivE..
but StILL
the wanderlust
bites.. the steak and
ice cream served up
by Nature every day..
i can’t get
tired of
it.. iT is
jUsT too Good..;)
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The only place I’ve visited in the US is New York. Compared to the UK and Europe, America is immense, there is so much to explore, so much diversity and I will never get to experience even a fraction of it. But I still have Venice 🙂
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SMiLes..
i really..
Gotta.. Get
Out more..;)
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So much to love about a city of overwhelming myths… bridges and sighs, what a great connection to that sight I have only heard of but never seen…
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You should go, Bjorn. It’s inspirational.
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Give me shimmering water under cloudless skies
In Venice, the city of bridges and sighs.
This is absolutely stunning, Kim 😀 An unforgettable write ❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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I’m so pleased you like it, Sanaa. I really enjoyed writing it – it brought back happy memories. Love Kim xx
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Lovely rhymes!
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Thank you!
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Delightful, romantic remembrance.
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Thank you, Sue!
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Wonderful worded beauty, Kim! Sounds so inviting!
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It’s just an overwhelmingly beautiful city!
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Bridges! I framed my response with bridge imagery in mind as well. 🙂 I enjoyed reading all of the tangible visuals along with the bridge structure. So many details here to help drop us right into those poem … and Venice. 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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the opening line is so inviting Kim- loved sampling Venice here
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Thanks for reading, Laura!
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